Rework of Assignment 2
Amendments
to Assignment 2
Following research around Nicky Bird's work, linking
the past with the present and streamlining the subject seemed the best way
forward. I revisited the pit landscape, walked around the village several times
with print outs of the photos I had collected to source their location,
included quotes from people I spoke to and found a poem written at the time of
the disaster to raise money for the families.
I visited Bilsthorpe Heritage Museum which is
run by ex-miners to understand more about the process of mining and the working
lives of miners which enhanced my knowledge of Rufford Colliery. I found
this hugely beneficial when visiting Lincoln Camera Club with Hazel to see
Chris Upton's Thoresby Colliery presentation.
I planned to print the book with a soft cover
in keeping with the local heritage section in Nottinghamshire’s rural and
central libraries. Many of the pamphlets are produced by individuals or
organisations, and after listening to Chris Upton’s anecdotes about printing, possibly
because of the cost involved. Blurb’s soft cover looked quite glossy and I was
unsure of the final result, so I simplified the image hoping to make visibility
clearer. Having only had hardback books printed in the past, I used Blurb’s discount
offer to experiment with printing in both formats, so I can choose the best fit
for assessment. The soft cover looked acceptable to me.
This work is now more conversational between
people and the land rather than a collection of photographs where the reader
has to muddle on through their own.
Thoresby
Colliery, Chris Upton - Photographer, Lincoln Camera Club, 29/6/2018
Hazel
(fellow OCA Photography student) invited me to an evening with her camera club
in Lincoln as I am interested in the work of Chris Upton, a local photographer
who photographed Thoresby Colliery, Nottinghamshire’s last working coal mine as
it prepared for closure.
Chris
gave a very informative slideshow presentation covering the camera he used,
some of the social aspects of the mine, some of the pitfalls and challenges
associated with his project. Hazel and I agreed with his comments, which
sounded as though he was voicing what we had experienced through OCA course
exercises and assignment work. On revisiting Chris’s work, I found his photos
made more sense as I had visited Bilsthorpe Heritage museum and spoken to local
ex-miners about the coal mining process. Mining (and the miners strike) is
still a very emotive subject which rumbles through mining communities as it
split families apart. It was enlightening to hear about financial
considerations, promotions offered by book shops, print runs, choices made with
printing, media campaigns and exhibitions.
Assignment 2 Tutor Feedback
Overall comments
A thorough, engaging and well-researched submission.
Feedback on assignment
You have themed your images based on: the present (the nature reserve and Harworth Estate), the present (Colliery Lane, the pit, the railway, etc.) and mention wanting to concentrate on the tower throughout as a kind of touch point. You have researched widely, using images from local library archives, online archives and collected over 130 images from these sources.
You also discuss your audience and mention showing the work in its R&D phase to others. You mention the need for an authentic voice (ex-miners, or the relatives/children etc. of ex-miners) rather than use pre-existing materials. I agree with you here. It might be useful to record (or find recorded some first person accounts) from those who worked (or were related to those who worked) in the colliery and also those who live there now. These two narratives could usefully be juxtaposed perhaps? I think this would add a very useful dimension to your research. The landscape tells us a certain amount – part of the story but of course not all of it. I think it’s important to ask yourself at the outset of the project: what do I want to say about this subject? Why? And how exactly am I going to do it. Bear in mind that this is a story that you could easily go on exploring over many assignments and that it will be possible to further develop and extend this research for quite a while if this is of interest to you.
Regarding the images themselves: you have produced some very effective imagery (lovely image over two pages of the pond rippling outwards which seems to speak to the idea of history constantly affecting the landscape). Your postcard strategy work well too. As mentioned, you have used imagery form the archive, the internet and found image. It might be useful to separate certain types of images out (ie a series of the postcard images only, etc) and see how these sit together as a single typology? A common mistake when photographers are beginning to find their voice is to put all of your ideas into one piece of work. I’d say there were actually at least three series of work in this book: the found newspaper clippings, the postcard montages and the documentary landscapes. Each of the series (perhaps accompanied by a first-person account or similar) cold make a good series. One is past, one is present and perhaps another could be future?
This is a good position to be in. You’ve done lots of research and now is the time to filter that out into separate components. In its final form, it doesn’t all have to be integrated into one piece of work. That said, your Blurb submission is well laid out throughout but could do with some playing about with possible edits. As I’m sure you are aware, meaning is conferred in the book by the edit not by the single image so bear that in mind when you are experimenting with different running orders/selections etc.
This is a thoroughly researched and engaging submission and bodes well for the future. Keep up the good work!
Reference: Roni Horn (re: use of text and landscape photography) in her series Still Water: https://vimeo.com/64165737 and http://www.tate.org.uk/art/artworks/horn-no-title-p13058
Nick Bird (Re: the representation of working class communities in the Uk (including mining communities): http://nickybird.com/bookworks/beneath-the-surface-hidden-place-2010/
(Nicky is also involved in the organization Family Values. They have frequent conferences and you might be interested in attending as their remit fits your interests well: https://familytiesnetwork.wordpress.com/news/
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As discussed, try to tease apart the different themes presented in book form (typology of landscapes, one of found images, one of montages) and experiment with different edits of your narrative. You have lots of material and ideas – don’t feel you have to evidence all of them in your final assignment. These can also be explored in exercises etc. too.
Student feedback from Assignment 2
This was an interesting assignment to put together. I agree with Wendy’s comments that there is a little of everything in it, which I will start to tease out and develop into a smaller piece of work. I am interested to see what I could do with postcards or documentary landscapes. This was a piece of work which developed as I went along, influenced by some archive exhibitions which I had seen and so the suggestion to be clear in what I want to say at the beginning is valid. This was an assignment which kept growing when I found another link.
As follow up work, I researched Nicky Bird’s work “Beneath the Surface / Hidden Place (2007-2010). I connected with it and began to think about taking this and previous assignments to develop in a similar way at a later date. I was interested in the community involvement and how the work was presented as there is some archaeology happening locally to me but most tends to be from much older time periods. I researched the Family Values organization which I have signed up to as some of the previous posts sound fascinating and may be helpful in developing my interests.
The way in which Roni Horn uses words with her images is something which I shall explore in more detail. Her text seems to work because she encourages the viewers to read her thoughts at the time of making / taking the photographs; including anything from questioning the color, informing the viewer of the local history (including suicides) to poetry or song lyrics. In both these two examples the photographs and words work well together, so my thoughts around using narrative would work.
We spoke of Matt Collishaw’s Thresholds exhibition currently touring in Birmingham which is relevant to Digital Image and Culture. Although the exhibition is due to close this weekend, it may travel to the National Media Museum in Bradford, although there is nothing advertised as yet. I will keep an eye out for it and hope to attend.
We briefly discussed the topic I had chosen to look at for my Critical Review for Assignment 3 to which Wendy encouraged me not to become too immersed in it. There is so much information around the digital self that I think it needs planning very carefully and sticking to one or 2 case studies in order to keep it concise and within the word count.
Assignment 2
52°07’.5”N 1°06’47.1”W
In the late 19th century, Rainworth
was a hamlet with a scattering of farms with a single road and a Toll House.
Public transport did not exist here. Just before the turn of the century came
the railway, and with it the Bolsover Colliery Company looking for coal in the
illustrious Nottinghamshire / Derbyshire coal fields. A pit was sunk and coal
was located. From here on the village developed into a thriving community. Bolsover
Colliery Company ensured that houses were built for the pit sinkers and a model
village for the miners based on the garden city designs of the time. With the
model village came amenities such as a drill hall, miner’s welfare, a school
and later shops and a church.
The grid reference of 52°07’.5”N 1°06’47.1”W
is located at the end of Colliery Lane, at the point where Harworth Estates
erected a barrier preventing access to the old pit. Regeneration and
conservation work is carried out in conjunction with The Wildlife Trust who
maintain Rainworth Heath. There are two access points into the heath from
Colliery Lane and the dismantled railways provide access to a bridleway running
through the colliery site. Locals visit these edgelands to walk their dogs,
cycle and ride trail bikes, creating desire paths across the landscape.
This assignment is an archive of the landscape which shaped and still
affects the village in which I live. A very distant memory recalls the images
of the towers, partly because I had no connection with the pit. Through my
research I have walked across the landscape many times, trying to piece
together the enormity and domination of the main village economy which was such
a principal factor in village life and now only the odd scars on the landscape
remain. Discussion with ex-miner colleagues and colleagues whose husbands were miners,
the varied source material which is being collated online, the local history
section of the library and the token collection box in Tesco’s hoping to be
selected for a community mining memorabilia project suggested that enough time
has passed for people to look back on the mining industry with nostalgia. With
the suggestion of a mine in Pennsylvania re-opening to mine coal in June 2017,
perhaps the passion for coal mining is not dead, but the Environment Act in
1995 was really the start of monitoring air pollution. Nottinghamshire coal was
notorious for being quite smoky, perhaps lending itself to use in the steel
industry.
The process
Coal mining books line the local history shelves in the town library
of which nothing covers Rufford Colliery. Two booklets detail images from
archival material of mines which readers had in their collections and one old
pamphlet on Bolsover Colliery Company contained some information and maps.
Online archives ranged from a BBC project to ex-miners hosting images with
information of interest to families collating their genealogy and ex-miners
recollecting memories of their working life. Sekula suggests that by creating
an archive of very different types of photographs, unity is achieved which is
exploited by ownership of the objects. The meaning of the photograph is
liberated as the archive is collated and knowledge is created (Wells 2010:63).
Archives then contradict themselves because the images are isolated but also
united. (Sekula as cited by Wells, 2010:64) Coal Mining could be considered a
heritage industry. Some coal mines have become tourist attractions, although I
do not foresee this site becoming a place where the tourist sets up his tripod
to take photographs.
I collected 130 images from books and the internet and used 35. 11
images were taken whilst exploring the area and 2 were from my archive.
Photographers such as Fontcuberta, Ritchin and Schmid promote the recycling of
images. The question was how to present the images in a meaningful way to the
target audience? Initially this was going to be an archive in linear time order
from the nature reserve to the sinking of the coal mine, uncovering the land
which was being covered up by the aggregate company. Through conversation and
inviting people associated with the colliery’s history to share memories with
me, I developed the idea into a collection of different memories using a blank
page to separate the sections. Visiting a couple of exhibitions in Nottingham (Strangers
not allowed on these works and the NTU Degree Show) confirmed this works and
the non–linear time order may hold the viewer’s attention for longer.
After listening to stories and reading a few on the internet it seemed
that the narrative should include the length of Colliery Lane and the vast
expanse of land which joined up all the local pits through which miners would
walk. Fortunately, there had only been one mining disaster (more than 10 deaths
occurring from an accident) at this colliery, although several had since lost
their lives. Remembrance and commemoration play a big part in miners’ lives
including plates, Davey lamps, coal tags and newspaper cuttings. I themed the
images concentrating on the present (nature reserve) and Harworth Estates, the
past and present such as Colliery Lane and the pit, relevant railways, working
life, pit history, demolition and present-day remembrance. By grouping archived
images in Photoshop, I could concentrate on which tower was which when presented
with multiple images.
I considered whether I should add cross-stitch to the landscape
photographs as a barrier because that is how the land feels. The people I
shared the images with were keen to see if there was anyone they knew. This
reminded me of Barthes photograph of his mother in Camera Lucida. If my target
audience was to be the local community, perhaps obscuring faces or presenting
barriers was not helpful.
People may recall media images from the 1984-1985 Miners Strike which provoked
unrest throughout the country with an abuse of power from those in authority.
At the time, the whole story was reported inaccurately, with the media taking
the side of the authorities. Having studied Deller’s re-enactment of the Battle
of Orgreave, I was interested to read the history of the Nottinghamshire miners
because I found no photographic evidence of strikes carried out at Rufford
Colliery. In fact, only 2000 out of 32,000 Nottinghamshire Miners went on
strike in 1984-5. Fontcuberta
suggests that interpreting documents is subjective, depending on the reader’s
culture and knowledge (Hildenbrand, 2008:113). If I was
to publish this book, I would need to research this area in more detail.
The risk of using archived
images is that “photography…revolutionalises memory: it multiplies and
democratises it, gives it a precision and a truth never before attained in
visual memory, and makes it possible to preserve the memory of time and
chronical evolution,” (Le Goff cited in Bate, 2010:247) explaining that family
photographs act like a memorial or monument to the past following Bourdieu’s
argument of “establishing the truth of social remembrance” (Bourdieu cited by
Bate 2010:248). My assignment mainly uses
images digitally archived by ex-miners. There is already mismatching of dates
and stories which is one of the concerns with archiving, as instead of it being
a collective memory, it becomes subject to secondary revision.
Society has a thirst for
archives to demonstrate validity and cohesion. To give my archive more credibility,
perhaps it needs a forward from an ex-miner from who was in a position of
authority at the colliery or someone who has written a book on the history of
Nottinghamshire coal-mines. On the other hand, without archives memory falters,
so at least there is a record of the colliery which retired miners would be
able to share with their grandchildren.
References
Hughes,
G. and Hildenbrand, K. (2008) Images of war and war of images. Newcastle:
Cambridge Scholars Publishing.
Wells,
L. (2010) Photography: a critical introduction. 4th Edition.
Abingdon: Routledge.
Bibliography
Fontcuberta, J. (2014) Pandora’s Camera: Photogr@phy after
photography. London. MACK
Paterson, H (2014) Look back in anger: The miners strike in Nottinghamshire 30 years on. Nottingham: Five leaves publication.
Wells, L. (2008) Allan Sekula: Reading
an Archive: Photography between labour and capital: The photography reader. Abingdon: Routledge.